It's a nice take on the original. Very well put together.
It seems a bit bare in the mid section though (like the around the 500hz). Your Bass and Melody is perfectly done, but it seems a bit empty in the background.
Perhaps adding some detuned Pads or something to fill them in? White noise is also important, it adds atmosphere. (You don't need to add anything big, most pads are barely audible anyways, there just there to take up space.)
Anyways, just my opinions. (They're probably more easier said than done cuz I'm a noob at making music too.) Still, job well done!